Let's Write !!!!! Next line
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Let's Write !!!!! Next line
by Poetic Petunia on Thu Jul 23, 2009 4:34 pm
Just an idea to keep ourselves entertained and writing
It's been done with shorts.. why not poetry ?
Let's see if we can't collaborate a kick ass piece
I'll begin:
Howling winds, darkened path
It's been done with shorts.. why not poetry ?
Let's see if we can't collaborate a kick ass piece
I'll begin:
Howling winds, darkened path
_________________
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Hell is a place for those who refuse to believe that death is final
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Re: Let's Write !!!!! Next line
by TrainofThought on Thu Jul 23, 2009 5:16 pm
Howling winds, darkened path
Long, frayed grass brushes skin
Long, frayed grass brushes skin
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Re: Let's Write !!!!! Next line
by davids on Thu Jul 23, 2009 7:38 pm
Howling winds, darkened path
Long, frayed grass brushes skin
as light she bends to the night
Long, frayed grass brushes skin
as light she bends to the night
_________________
el lobsterino is back in town! Time is not a memorial
it is the pasture where man lies in wait
The lugubrious Lobs
'Consistency is the last refuge of the unimaginative' -- Oscar Wilde
as chaste men think
so the world goes asunder
for evil disguised in chaste sweet guilt
is the evil that kills the children
and starves the soul of love-Elwood Jake 08/24/2009-belches loudly
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Re: Let's Write !!!!! Next line
by AmandaLyn on Fri Jul 24, 2009 1:12 am
great idea P. :)
Howling winds, darkened path
Long, frayed grass brushes skin
as light she bends to the night
upon her much depends
Howling winds, darkened path
Long, frayed grass brushes skin
as light she bends to the night
upon her much depends
_________________
As my dear old pappy used to say, 'If you can't dazzle them with diamonds, baffle them with bullshit'.
Just spectorating on the daffodillies of my mind
Life is full of fluffy daffodileyes just waitin round the bend.
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Re: Let's Write !!!!! Next line
by davids on Fri Jul 24, 2009 1:16 am
Howling winds, darkened path
Long, frayed grass brushes skin
as light she bends to the night
upon her much depends
what of such wind dear heart
Long, frayed grass brushes skin
as light she bends to the night
upon her much depends
what of such wind dear heart
_________________
el lobsterino is back in town! Time is not a memorial
it is the pasture where man lies in wait
The lugubrious Lobs
'Consistency is the last refuge of the unimaginative' -- Oscar Wilde
as chaste men think
so the world goes asunder
for evil disguised in chaste sweet guilt
is the evil that kills the children
and starves the soul of love-Elwood Jake 08/24/2009-belches loudly
davids- Admin
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Re: Let's Write !!!!! Next line
by TrainofThought on Fri Jul 24, 2009 2:06 am
Howling winds, darkened path
Long, frayed grass brushes skin
as light she bends to the night
upon her much depends
what of such wind dear heart
Troubles such a spirited soul
Long, frayed grass brushes skin
as light she bends to the night
upon her much depends
what of such wind dear heart
Troubles such a spirited soul
_________________
Be the kind of woman that when your feet hit the floor each morning the devil says, "Oh Crap, She's up!"
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Re: Let's Write !!!!! Next line
by Poetic Petunia on Fri Jul 24, 2009 4:10 pm
Howling winds, darkened path
Long, frayed grass brushes skin
as light she bends to the night
upon her much depends
what of such wind dear heart
Troubles such a spirited soul
frantic longing, swift to run
Long, frayed grass brushes skin
as light she bends to the night
upon her much depends
what of such wind dear heart
Troubles such a spirited soul
frantic longing, swift to run
_________________
Don't ask for an easier life, ask to be a stronger person
Hell is a place for those who refuse to believe that death is final
.
.Dare to Dream http://www.tleinsl.com/
http://mitziszereto.com/blog/
http://emotionpoems.blogspot.com
http://amusinglyrandomthoughts.blogspot.com
http://thepucksstophere.blogspot.com/
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Re: Let's Write !!!!! Next line
by davids on Fri Jul 24, 2009 4:50 pm
+
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-Howling winds, darkened path
Long, frayed grass brushes skin
as light she bends to the night
upon her much depends
what of such wind dear heart
Troubles such a spirited soul
frantic longing, swift to run
halting, yet, in distant howl
----
-Howling winds, darkened path
Long, frayed grass brushes skin
as light she bends to the night
upon her much depends
what of such wind dear heart
Troubles such a spirited soul
frantic longing, swift to run
halting, yet, in distant howl
_________________
el lobsterino is back in town! Time is not a memorial
it is the pasture where man lies in wait
The lugubrious Lobs
'Consistency is the last refuge of the unimaginative' -- Oscar Wilde
as chaste men think
so the world goes asunder
for evil disguised in chaste sweet guilt
is the evil that kills the children
and starves the soul of love-Elwood Jake 08/24/2009-belches loudly
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Re: Let's Write !!!!! Next line
by JustaMan on Fri Jul 24, 2009 11:14 pm
[quote="davids"]+
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-Howling winds, darkened path
Long, frayed grass brushes skin
as light she bends to the night
upon her much depends
what of such wind dear heart
Troubles such a spirited soul
frantic longing, swift to run
halting, yet, in distant howl
A message came thru swirling dusk
----
-Howling winds, darkened path
Long, frayed grass brushes skin
as light she bends to the night
upon her much depends
what of such wind dear heart
Troubles such a spirited soul
frantic longing, swift to run
halting, yet, in distant howl
A message came thru swirling dusk
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Re: Let's Write !!!!! Next line
by davids on Mon Jul 27, 2009 12:06 am
Howling winds, darkened path
Long, frayed grass brushes skin
as light she bends to the night
upon her much depends
what of such wind dear heart
Troubles such a spirited soul
frantic longing, swift to run
halting, yet, in distant howl
A message came thru swirling dusk
as wolves smirk, grimmace fangs
Long, frayed grass brushes skin
as light she bends to the night
upon her much depends
what of such wind dear heart
Troubles such a spirited soul
frantic longing, swift to run
halting, yet, in distant howl
A message came thru swirling dusk
as wolves smirk, grimmace fangs
_________________
el lobsterino is back in town! Time is not a memorial
it is the pasture where man lies in wait
The lugubrious Lobs
'Consistency is the last refuge of the unimaginative' -- Oscar Wilde
as chaste men think
so the world goes asunder
for evil disguised in chaste sweet guilt
is the evil that kills the children
and starves the soul of love-Elwood Jake 08/24/2009-belches loudly
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Re: Let's Write !!!!! Next line
by Poetic Petunia on Mon Jul 27, 2009 1:47 am
Howling winds, darkened path
Long, frayed grass brushes skin
as light she bends to the night
upon her much depends
what of such wind dear heart
Troubles such a spirited soul
frantic longing, swift to run
halting, yet, in distant howl
A message came thru swirling dusk
as wolves smirk, grimmace fangs
salted beads of sweat glisten at the nape
Long, frayed grass brushes skin
as light she bends to the night
upon her much depends
what of such wind dear heart
Troubles such a spirited soul
frantic longing, swift to run
halting, yet, in distant howl
A message came thru swirling dusk
as wolves smirk, grimmace fangs
salted beads of sweat glisten at the nape
_________________
Don't ask for an easier life, ask to be a stronger person
Hell is a place for those who refuse to believe that death is final
.
.Dare to Dream http://www.tleinsl.com/
http://mitziszereto.com/blog/
http://emotionpoems.blogspot.com
http://amusinglyrandomthoughts.blogspot.com
http://thepucksstophere.blogspot.com/
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Re: Let's Write !!!!! Next line
by JustaMan on Mon Jul 27, 2009 1:23 pm
Howling winds, darkened path
Long, frayed grass brushes skin
as light she bends to the night
upon her much depends
what of such wind dear heart
Troubles such a spirited soul
frantic longing, swift to run
halting, yet, in distant howl
A message came thru swirling dusk
as wolves smirk, grimmace fangs
salted beads of sweat glisten at the nape
gristled, brisled with hackles raised
Long, frayed grass brushes skin
as light she bends to the night
upon her much depends
what of such wind dear heart
Troubles such a spirited soul
frantic longing, swift to run
halting, yet, in distant howl
A message came thru swirling dusk
as wolves smirk, grimmace fangs
salted beads of sweat glisten at the nape
gristled, brisled with hackles raised
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Re: Let's Write !!!!! Next line
by Poetic Petunia on Mon Aug 03, 2009 12:09 am
Howling winds, darkened path
Long, frayed grass brushes skin
as light she bends to the night
upon her much depends
what of such wind dear heart
Troubles such a spirited soul
frantic longing, swift to run
halting, yet, in distant howl
A message came thru swirling dusk
as wolves smirk, grimmace fangs
salted beads of sweat glisten at the nape
gristled, brisled with hackles raised
Silent begging masked in fear
Long, frayed grass brushes skin
as light she bends to the night
upon her much depends
what of such wind dear heart
Troubles such a spirited soul
frantic longing, swift to run
halting, yet, in distant howl
A message came thru swirling dusk
as wolves smirk, grimmace fangs
salted beads of sweat glisten at the nape
gristled, brisled with hackles raised
Silent begging masked in fear
_________________
Don't ask for an easier life, ask to be a stronger person
Hell is a place for those who refuse to believe that death is final
.
.Dare to Dream http://www.tleinsl.com/
http://mitziszereto.com/blog/
http://emotionpoems.blogspot.com
http://amusinglyrandomthoughts.blogspot.com
http://thepucksstophere.blogspot.com/
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Re: Let's Write !!!!! Next line
by davids on Mon Aug 03, 2009 12:39 am
+
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-Howling winds, darkened path
Long, frayed grass brushes skin
as light she bends to the night
upon her much depends
what of such wind dear heart
Troubles such a spirited soul
frantic longing, swift to run
halting, yet, in distant howl
A message came thru swirling dusk
as wolves smirk, grimmace fangs
salted beads of sweat glisten at the nape
gristled, brisled with hackles raised
Silent begging masked in fear
the sun is rising, all undone
----
-Howling winds, darkened path
Long, frayed grass brushes skin
as light she bends to the night
upon her much depends
what of such wind dear heart
Troubles such a spirited soul
frantic longing, swift to run
halting, yet, in distant howl
A message came thru swirling dusk
as wolves smirk, grimmace fangs
salted beads of sweat glisten at the nape
gristled, brisled with hackles raised
Silent begging masked in fear
the sun is rising, all undone
_________________
el lobsterino is back in town! Time is not a memorial
it is the pasture where man lies in wait
The lugubrious Lobs
'Consistency is the last refuge of the unimaginative' -- Oscar Wilde
as chaste men think
so the world goes asunder
for evil disguised in chaste sweet guilt
is the evil that kills the children
and starves the soul of love-Elwood Jake 08/24/2009-belches loudly
davids- Admin
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favorite author(s): Steinbeck, Vonnegut
favorite work(s): East of Eden, Snowshoeing for Dummies
Points: 2284
REPPIES: 281
Registration date: 2008-08-01
Re: Let's Write !!!!! Next line
by TrainofThought on Mon Aug 03, 2009 1:45 am
Howling winds, darkened path
Long, frayed grass brushes skin
as light she bends to the night
upon her much depends
what of such wind dear heart
Troubles such a spirited soul
frantic longing, swift to run
halting, yet, in distant howl
A message came thru swirling dusk
as wolves smirk, grimmace fangs
salted beads of sweat glisten at the nape
gristled, brisled with hackles raised
Silent begging masked in fear
the sun is rising, all undone
Dark spirits find their eternal slots
Long, frayed grass brushes skin
as light she bends to the night
upon her much depends
what of such wind dear heart
Troubles such a spirited soul
frantic longing, swift to run
halting, yet, in distant howl
A message came thru swirling dusk
as wolves smirk, grimmace fangs
salted beads of sweat glisten at the nape
gristled, brisled with hackles raised
Silent begging masked in fear
the sun is rising, all undone
Dark spirits find their eternal slots
_________________
Be the kind of woman that when your feet hit the floor each morning the devil says, "Oh Crap, She's up!"
TrainofThought- Lost in Translation
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Number of posts: 1954
Age: 41
Location: Cheekago!
|: drinking eggnog under the mistletoe
genre: stuff with smoochies in it
favorite author(s): AmandaLyn
favorite work(s): anything she writes in the dare thread
Points: 945
REPPIES: 79
Registration date: 2008-08-07 -
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